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Chinese Zodiac: Rabbit

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Project: Oasis Days
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Happy New Year! Happy 2011 the year of rabbits (according to Chinese zodiac) !
I was kind of hibernating in the whole 2010, I think it's time to get up -_-b
Wish you all have a nice and lucky year!
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I adore your work and this picture is no exception to my appreciation. However, for the sake of helping you I would like to give my thoughts on what I think could help you to improve it. These are however just my personal thoughts and opinion so if you do not agree I understand.

I think that it would not have hurt to use a bit less smudging on the smoke as it becomes a bit distracting. A more concise outline of the character itself would have helped make them stand out amongst the smoke which nearly matches (white color). I can see a very small error (or perhaps it was intentional?) where the staff is positioned behind one of those stylistic rectangles. It looks like there is a small bit of white glow emanating from the rectangle over the staff which is nearly unnoticeable without really examining the work.

Now those are just a couple things I noticed and I could probably compliment the piece up and down all day otherwise. Mostly it's an opinion on my part and the picture is more than acceptable! Just to note a few things I especially liked, the color palette is great, the anatomy is spot on, the lantern is beautiful, and I really like the original designs for the clothing.