Sonia On her trip. this is a fixed version of the old one [link] but it just fix too much that seems like a impossible fix...XD this picture focus on the feeling of the whole, but not how detail it can be.
Sorry about being so late on my comment, I just really didn't get around to it... Like I said, sorry. As far as improvements go, this is drastic, from the first to the revision, it seems alot more lively. If you ever decide to modify this further, you may want to fill in the background alittle more fully, and possibly shade the entire thing in. Perhaps you should try to round her toes alittle, but really, its exemplary...
By the way, what is that in her mouth? A passport?
Alright. I'm having a very hard time supressing the feeling this artwork is giving me. It feels like I've just eaten a whole bag of post-use by date candy. I'm not joking. Your beautiful, elegant, serene style is so unique and wonderful to look at. I just love your work!
Ah! This is much more appealing composition wise than the first, and the warmth of the image shines through!
I still like the eyes and the shading, and engoy how the shadows contrast with the base color makes the form more evident!
Nice work! ^___________^